||come across as a first-time effort at all, obviously the editing experience helps a lot, but you kept me engaged the whole time.
Great touch in how you tied it all together with the off-track incident. I saw what you did there, but didn't see it coming! Really well done.
30 years ago...or now?
"I torch my soul to show the world that I am pure deep inside my heart...."
--William Patrick Corgan